Today at 4:30 pm ET, Lauren Groh-Wargo, CEO of pro-voter organization Fair Fight, which was instrumental in electing two Democratic Senators in Georgia and breaking the Republican supermajority in the Mississippi Legislature, joins us for a Substack Live. This is the second in our Autocracy, Democracy, and Kleptocracy series. It’s a fitting day for Lauren to join—not only are we celebrating the fourth anniversary of Civil Discourse, today, we also mark three years since the Supreme Court decided Milligan, the Alabama case where the Court disallowed use of virtually the same, inspired-by-racism maps that they are now permitting the state to use in the wake of Callais. We’ll discuss that and more, and of course we want to answer your questions too, so leave them in the chat: We’re in this together, Joyce You're currently a free subscriber to Civil Discourse with Joyce Vance . For the full experience, upgrade your subscription.
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Monday, June 8, 2026
Substack Live with Lauren Groh-Wargo, Monday at 4:30 pm ET
📂 NEW: We'll beat your conversion rate in 30 days, or full refund
So far we've never run an A/B test that didn't beat the control. We're putting that streak on the line. If we don't beat your conversion rate in 30 days, you get a full refund. It's called the Conversion Rate Guarantee, and we just opened up applications. The streakThis isn't us being modest. We've genuinely never run a test that lost. Part of that is methodology — we don't run small tweaks hoping for noise. We rebuild high-leverage parts of the page based on what we've learned across 100+ SaaS clients. Headlines, CTAs, sections, full redesigns. When we ship a variant, it's because we have a hypothesis grounded in real patterns. The other part is selection. We don't take every page. We take pages where the gap between "what's there now" and "what could work" is wide enough to bet on. So we figured: instead of just claiming the track record, let's make a guarantee that puts our money where it is. How the Conversion Rate Guarantee worksYou pick one critical page — homepage, pricing page, or demo page. We agree on a baseline. We get 30 days to beat it with unlimited A/B tests. If we do, we double down. If we don't, you get every dollar back. That's the whole pitch. The four rulesWe agreed on a few rules upfront so this couldn't be gamed in either direction:
Who this is forYou have a critical page with enough traffic to run real tests (we'll help you confirm this upfront). You know your current conversion rate and can share analytics access. You're willing to let our team make real changes — not just minor copy tweaks. The guarantee only works if we have room to actually move the number. You want a partner who's putting their own money on the line. If that's you, this is for you. How to startHead to conversionfactory.co/offers/conversion-rate-guarantee. Book a call. We'll review your page, your traffic, and your baseline together. If it's a fit, we'll lock in the engagement. Spots are limited — we can't run this many tests across many clients at once, so we're being selective. What would your MRR look like with 20% more conversions on your highest-traffic page?Less Annoying CRM hit that exact number running this with us. It's not theoretical. If the math on 20% more trial signups (or demo bookings, or paid conversions) sounds good — let's talk.
Talk soon, —Corey |
📂 How to write copy 80% faster (and better)
Most copywriters dread a blank pageWe can stare at it for hours, drafting and redrafting until something clicks. Even after we get started, it can still take what feels like forever to find a rhythm. In the past I could spend a full week on a single landing page. Now, with AI doing the grunt work, that same landing page takes one or two hours, and the quality often surpasses what I could produce alone. For my agency, Conversion Factory, this shift has let me scale output dramatically. I've managed to deliver more in the last year and a half than in the previous seven years combined — all while maintaining the high-converting copy our SaaS clients rely on. Here’s a workshop I did a while ago with Ben’s Bites, where I explain how I started using AI, and how I use it to accelerate my copywriting workflow across the board (without sacrificing quality): AI isn't a cheap shortcut, unless you treat it like a cheap shortcut. When used properly, it's a force multiplier that frees you to focus more on strategy and less on drudgery. But this only works if you use AI with precision, as a tool, not a magic button. By drawing from principles of legends like David Ogilvy, I’ve integrated AI into my workflow using my 5 stages of copywriting (with AI). I'll break down why AI tools matter for SaaS marketing and share the exact steps used so you can replicate my process. Why Use AI for Copywriting in SaaSFirst, let’s take a step back and look at the big picture. SaaS marketing demands precision: clear value propositions, benefit-driven messaging, and copy that converts visitors into users. Traditional copywriting is time-intensive, often bottlenecking campaigns. AI changes that by accelerating ideation and iteration without diluting the end result. Think of it like a relay race, AI runs the first 80% of every lap, and then passes you the baton. You still have to run with it and cross that finish line.
To boil it down to its core: AI excels at generating drafts and doing busy-work but needs a human hand for guidance, and again to ultimately build everything into a finished product. Without structure, outputs are generic. After providing proper structure, you create copy that resonates, drives sign-ups, and reduces churn by aligning messaging with user needs. (The key is to provide valuable context and some basic prompt engineering.) For SaaS companies, using AI effectively means launching features faster, refining onboarding emails on the fly, and refining campaigns at scale — all while keeping costs down. How I use AI to write high-converting copyI approach every project in the same order of steps, with these 5 stages of copywriting (with AI). Here’s a brief overview of the process before we dive in.
AI assists at each stage, but I always start with human insight. This workflow is built around ChatGPT, with custom prompts incorporating Ogilvy-inspired rules. Here's the step-by-step process, with a few examples from real projects. 1. ResearchGather raw inputs (10-20 Minutes) Start with facts, not assumptions. AI can and will invent information if you give it nothing, so feed it accurate context first to prevent this.
AI role Output Why this works 2. OutlineBuild the structure (15-30 Minutes) Map the structure out before filling it in. For a landing page, this might include headline, subheads, body sections, and CTAs. For a cheat sheet (A very good one I might add, even if I’m biased), check out our CF vanilla template here.
AI role Output
Why this works 3. DraftingGenerate initial copy with rules (20-40 Minutes) This is where AI shines. I use a custom prompt template embedding "rules of great copywriting," distilled from Ogilvy's books like "Ogilvy on Advertising." These rules force AI to produce direct, active, jargon-free copy. My full rules set (You can borrow this or adapt it for your own rule set):
AI role Output Why this works 4. EditingRefine and humanize (30-60 Minutes) AI drafts are 70-80% there. Edit for voice, flow, and nuance.
Lastly, check for any distracting GPT-isms or quirks of your AI, and proper punctuation. These can come in many forms, and you’ll start to recognize them quickly when using AI. Here’s a short list of common ones, written as directions for your AI:
AI role Output Why this works 5. Polishing and testing(10-20 Minutes) Final pass to perfect your work.
AI role Why this works Real example For a client’s email automation tool, research showed users struggled with personalization. Outline focused on pain relief. AI drafted: "Stop sending generic emails. Use our AI to tailor messages that land in inboxes." After edits, final: "Generic emails waste time and lose leads. Our tool analyzes behavior to send messages that get opened — and acted on." Results: Client saw 15% uplift in conversions post-launch. 5 AI principles for SaaS marketersTo use this workflow and successfully produce high quality content, ensure you follow these key principles. Here they are in order so you can apply them:
Adopting this saves time while elevating copy — turning your copywriting process from a bottleneck into a highway for deliverables. What's holding you back from leveraging AI? Have you tried integrating AI this way, or does something still feel off? Reply with your experiences — I'd value hearing how AI fits into your SaaS workflow. —Corey
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Substack Live with Lauren Groh-Wargo, Monday at 4:30 pm ET
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